Today we are recapping - Friday 12th June 2020 English: Edit and improve a persuasive advert

Page created by Jim Gallagher
 
CONTINUE READING
Today we are recapping - Friday 12th June 2020 English: Edit and improve a persuasive advert
Friday 12th June 2020

          Today we are recapping…
English: Edit and improve a persuasive advert
              Maths: Arithmetic
           Spelling: Spelling check
      Science: Scientists and inventors
Today we are recapping - Friday 12th June 2020 English: Edit and improve a persuasive advert
English

Friday 12th June 2020

I can edit and improve a persuasive advert.
Today we are recapping - Friday 12th June 2020 English: Edit and improve a persuasive advert
Starter-
Common
Exception
Words

Read the
following
common
exception
words in
your head.
Did any of
them trick
you?
Now you have drafted your persuasive advert, it is very
important to edit and improve it!

Use the editing cards on the following slides to help you edit and
improve your work.

Once you have improved your draft, you may write up your work in
your best handwriting.
Spelling
                                           Punctuation
Spellings need to be correct so that the
 reader can understand what has been                        Check for:
                                                            - Full stops
                written.                                 - Capital letters
              Either use:
- A dictionary (this can be online using      Check you have used these correctly
                 Kiddle)                   (you may not have used all of the following
 - Word mats (from previous lessons)           punctuation in this week’s writing):
                                                            - Commas ,
        to check your spellings.                          - Apostrophes ’
                                                     - Inverted Commas “ ”
                                                     - Exclamation marks !
                                                        - Question marks ?
Sentences                                           Adjectives

 -       Have you included short sentences?
                                                       Adjectives describe nouns. E.g.
     -       Have you included compound                magnificent hotel, sparkling star.
                     sentences?
                                                      Check your work to see if you have
         -    Have you included complex
                     sentences?                        included a variety of interesting
                                                                 adjectives.
    The video link below reminds you of what short     - Can you improve any of them?
sentences, compound sentences and complex sentences
                          are.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smgyeUomfyA&feat
                   ure=emb_logo
Adverbs
 Adverbs help describe verbs. They tell us how the verb is being performed e.g. quickly
                                walked, slowly jumped.
                - Check your work to see if you have included adverbs.

 Paragraphs                                  Vocabulary
When there is a change of theme, time or      Writing is always more interesting to read
   place you need a new paragraph.             when imaginative vocabulary is used.
- Check that you have included paragraphs.    - Use a thesaurus to improve your words
  - If you have spotted a place where you       (this can be done online using Kiddle).
 could have started a new paragraph, put       - Can you use any synonyms to improve
                     //.                         your words? You can look online for
                                                       synonyms using Kiddle.
12.6.20                                               XII.VI.MMXX
                               Maths

             Today you will be
          completing an arithmetic
                    test
          Give yourself 25 minutes to complete the test
12.6.20                      XII.VI.MMXX

  Five in 5
  1)   290+700=
  2)   827+400=
  3)   3x3=
  4)   40÷8=
  5)   What is double 400?
12.6.20                          XII.VI.MMXX

  Five in 5-Answers
  1)   290+700=990
  2)   827-400=427
  3)   3x3=9
  4)   40÷8=5
  5)   What is double 400? 800
Answers
https://play.ttrockstars.com/auth/school/student/3505
Spelling

• Ask an adult to test you on the spellings for this week!
• Remember to copy out any you get wrong three times, using cursive
                                                                        scope
handwriting!
• Good Luck!                                                           telescope
                                                                      microscope
                                                                      horoscope
                                                                      periscope
                                                                        inspect
                                                                      spectator
                                                                       respect
                                                                      perspective
                                                                      spectacles
Science
       I can understand the role of scientists and inventors.
Today we are going to look at how scientists have helped to give us an
understanding of plants.
We will look at some famous scientists and some of the things they discovered.
This week we will take a look at some people that helped us to understand
different species of plants.

     Some plants are native to       Other plants are non-native. This
      Britain. This means that       means they have been brought here
     they have grown here for        from different countries.
     many years and have not
    been brought here from any
          other countries.

                                                                        With thanks to Twinkl
I can understand the role of scientists and inventors.

            Sir Joseph Banks 1743-1820
             Joseph Banks was an English scientist who studied plants. He became
             famous when he took part in Captain Cook's first voyage to Brazil,
             Tahiti, New Zealand and Australia. He was President of the Royal
             Society for 41 years, and advised King
George III on how to set up the Royal Gardens at Kew. He introduced the eucalyptus,
acacia and the banksia, which was named after him. Altogether, around 80 species
of plants are named after him in some way.
                                                                                              Banksia

       David Douglas 1799-1834
       David Douglas was a Scottish botanist who worked at the Glasgow
       Botanical Gardens and the Royal Horticultural Society in London. He took
       part in three trips from England to North America. He introduced the
       Douglas fir in 1827, as well as several other pines, fir trees, the lupin and
       the flowering currant. Douglas died on an expedition to Hawaii while
       climbing a mountain called Mauna Kea.

  Lupin
                                                                                       With thanks to Twinkl
I can understand the role of scientists and inventors.
            Jeanne Baret 1740 - 1807
             Jeanne Baret was a French woman who accompanied her partner, the
             botanist Philbert Commerson, on an expedition to South America, Tahiti
             and Mauritius. She was the first woman to sail around the world. Women
             were not allowed on board ships at
  that time so she had to disguise herself as a man to join the expedition. She and
  Commerson introduced the bougainvillea to Europe, as well as around 70 other
  plants. Only one, the solanum baretiae, was named after her.

                                                                                    solanum baretiae

              Tom Hart Dyke 1976 - Present
              Tom Hart Dyke is an English horticulturalist and plant hunter. He is the
              designer of the World Garden at Lullingstone Castle. The World Garden
              contains around 8000 species of plants, many collected by Hart Dyke
              himself. Tom Hart Dyke was kidnapped on an expedition to collect a rare
              orchid in South America. He was held captive for nine months with his
              friend, Paul Winder. When he was released, he returned home and
              created his World Garden. He still hunts rare plants today.

orchid
                                                                                         With thanks to Twinkl
I can understand the role of scientists and inventors.
Draw these famous scientists into your book. Write their names and match the key facts
below to each scientist. Make your workbook look like a factsheet page.

  I was kidnapped in South America             I introduced the Douglas fir, the lupin
       while looking for orchids.                    and the flowering currant.

  I died while climbing a mountain in         I introduced the eucalyptus and ocacia
                 Hawaii.                                      trees.

   I designed and created the World
                                                I was the first woman to sail around
 Garden, containing over 8,000 species
                                                              the world.
               of plants.

  I was involved in setting up the Royal
                                                   I introduced the bougainvillea.
             Gardens at Kew.
I can understand the role of scientists and inventors.
Without the work of scientists, we would not have any pictures, information or variety
of plants to see from around the world. They have helped us to understand lots of
different species from every part of the Earth.

                                        Imagine you are a scientist.
                                            Make a factsheet.
                                    What would be your plant legacy?
                              Will your plant discovery be named after you?

                                                          Challenge.
                                               Collect scrap materials from in
                                               your home and build a model
                                                   of your plant discovery.

                                                                                 With thanks to Twinkl
You can also read