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Poetry and Visual Arts
Project 2021
A collection of poems and artwork
exploring the themes of ‘Lost Things’,
‘Growing Up’ and ‘Change’
Poetry and Visual Arts - Project 2021 A collection of poems and artwork exploring the themes of 'Lost Things', 'Growing Up' and 'Change' ...
Welcome to Staffordshire University’s
                                                                                            Poetry and Visual Arts Project 2021
Contents                                                                                    What is it about?
What is it about?                       3   Connotations: Associated words, ideas or        Staffordshire University’s PGCE Department are offering         A little bonus…
                                            images that a particular word evokes       13   you the opportunity to write a poem or create a piece of        Each section of the anthology will have a star poem and
Why should I get involved?                                                                  visual art based on one of three themes:                        star piece of artwork which will be shortlisted by one of the
How do I get involved?                      Sounds to create effects                   14
                                                                                                                                                            English or Art Trainee Teachers and then chosen by our
File formats                                The Big Question: How can I use                 • Lost Things                                                   Staffordshire Poet Laureate, Mel Wardle-Woodend and
                                            metaphors to create a poem                 15   • Growing Up                                                    local artist, Kate Windsor. The star poems and artwork will
How to submit your arrtwork             4                                                   • Change                                                        be placed at the beginning of each section. Star poem
                                            Poetry writing tips                        16
Visual Arts resources and top tips                                                                                                                          writers will also receive a £10 Amazon gift voucher to
to create your artwork                  5   Creative task                              17   Any student from any year can enter from years 7-13. You        spend on a book of their choice, while the star artists will
                                                                                            do not have to be in top sets or amazing at English or Art      receive an Art Box full of exciting materials worth £50.
How do I start to create an artwork?    6                                                   – it’s open for everyone and everyone’s contribution will
What can I write about?                 6                                                   be welcome.
                                                                                                                                                            WHY SHOULD I GET INVOLVED?
Poetry resources and top tips           7                                                   Every poem and piece of artwork will be published
                                                                                            electronically in an anthology by the end of the school         • It’s an opportunity to be creative
Playing with words in poetry            9
                                                                                            year and each student who contributes will be sent              • You can create something that is important to you –
A crash course in Imagist poetry       10                                                   a personal copy of the electronic anthology and a                 with no restrictions!
                                                                                            certificate of participation.                                   • You can vent your fear, frustration, anger, joy,
                                                                                                                                                              happiness, worry about what is happening in an
                                                                                            The aim of this project is to give you the opportunity to be      unusual and therapeutic way (yes – being creative
                                                                                            creative, have a voice and an outlet in these very strange        is therapeutic!)
                                                                                            times. Your entries are not marked or assessed and there        • It looks great on college/university applications
                                                                                            are no mark schemes or success criteria; your poem will
                                                                                                                                                            • It will help you with your English and Art lessons
                                                                                            purely be read for pleasure by a wide range of people. The
                                                                                                                                                              in school
                                                                                            main thing is that you enjoy what you are writing and use
                                                                                            it as an opportunity to voice your opinion, have a little fun   • You can challenge yourself to do something you’ve
                                                                                            and do something different.                                       never done before.

                                                                                            There are no rules! Your poem does not have to rhyme,           HOW DO I GET INVOLVED?
                                                                                            it does not have to have lots of poetic techniques, it can
                                                                                            be very short or very long and it can explore any aspect        Write your poem or create your artwork and send it to
                                                                                            of the theme you have chosen to write about. If you             the following email address by: Monday June 7th 2021
                                                                                            speak another language, you can include words from that         poetry@staffs.ac.uk
                                                                                            language too and it can be simple or abstract. Your poem
                                                                                            does, however, have to come from the heart which means          Make sure you include your name, school, age and which
                                                                                            it can be sad or funny! You can also present your poem          theme you used for your poem or artwork. (If you want to
                                                                                            in any way you like – handwritten (as long as it’s legible      be anonymous in the anthology, that’s fine. You can tell
                                                                                            and clear) or typed. Your artwork doesn’t have to be just       us this in your email) Don’t forget to give your poem an
                                                                                            a drawing it can be any art materials you like: a digital       interesting title.
                                                                                            image, a craft piece, a collage, a sculpture, a photograph
                                                                                            - anything at all that gets you creating, using art materials   It’s as simple as that!
                                                                                            that you enjoy making with.                                     *You are only allowed to submit one poem.

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Visual Arts resources and top tips to
How to submit your artwork:                                                                                              create your artwork

You will need to submit your artwork by taking a good       FILE FORMATS                                                 The Associate Teachers in Art and Design have created         items from your kitchen cupboard and recycle cardboard
quality photograph of it or submit a scan of your artwork                                                                a resource to help you get started if you haven’t any art     and other papers. You don’t need specialist art materials
if appropriate (A flat artwork for example, a painting      • Photographs or scans should be submitted either as         materials at home. Think about which art materials you        to participate in this project. See below for some ideas
or drawing).                                                  an individual image files or document.                     have enjoyed using at school or at home before, don’t         for creative resources you could use.
                                                                                                                         worry if you haven’t specialist art supplies you could use
This is a tricky task and so we have put together some      We can accept the following file types and sizes:
do’s and don’ts about how to take a good image of
your visual artwork creations.                               File type          File format         Max. individual
                                                                                                    file size
                                                                                                                                 Stuck for creative                                                                  Tea
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Coffee
Do’s:                                                        Image              .jpg                15Mb                         resources?                                                                          Gravy browning
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Soil
• Take your photo straight on and not on an angle                               .png
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Turmeric
• Take the photo in good lighting, without glare                                .tif
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Beetroot
  or reflection                                                                 .doc                                               Back/inside of A4 envelope                                                        Red onion skin
                                                                                .bmp
• Make sure the photograph is in focus so that all                                                                                 Back of old letters/ receipts –                                                   Soya Sauce
                                                                                .pdf                                               get permission
  the image can be seen clearly
                                                             Document           .pdf                25Mb                           Inside cereal box
• Fill the frame with your visual artwork creation
                                                                                .doc                                               Wrapping paper
• Have a white or neutral, uncluttered background                               .docx                                              Brown paper
  behind the artwork                                                            .pages                                             Cardboard
• Only included one image for the project submission-                                                                              Whiteboard
  include your name and project theme as part of the                                                                               Mobile phone drawing apps
  saved image or documents file when you email your                                                                                The plain side of an old Birthday card/
                                                                                                                                   Christmas card
  submission to poetry@staffs.ac.uk
                                                                                                                                   Packaging paper

Don’ts                                                                                                                             Newspaper
                                                                                                                                   Baking paper – alternative tracing paper
• Do not crop, adjust, balance or re-size the
  photographs
• Do not photograph your creation that is behind glass
  or in plastic sleeves
• Avoid hands/arms in the image when taking your
                                                                                                                          HOW DO I START TO CREATE AN ARTWORK?
  photograph of the artwork
                                                                                                                           You need to choose one of the themes from this                like to create. You can create your artwork in any medium
                                                                                                                           year’s project:                                               you like. The hardest part about making an artwork is
                                                                                                                                                                                         getting started, but the best thing to do is just start by
                                                                                                                           • Lost Things                                                 being creative and looking at other artists for inspiration,
                                                                                                                           • Growing Up                                                  have a search on the internet and use art materials that
                                                                                                                           • Change                                                      you enjoy working with.

                                                                                                                           Start by looking on the internet for inspiration to the       Have a look at some of the lock down artwork that
                                                                                                                           topic themes, mind map your thoughts about the topic          has been created through Grayson Perry’s Art club
                                                                                                                           chosen. Start to make initial sketches about what you may     https://www.graysonsartclub.com/

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What can I write about?                                                              Poetry resources and top tips

You need to choose one of the themes from this                                       The Associate Teachers in English have created some            POPULAR POETRY FORMS
                                                                                     resources to help you get started. If you’ve never written
year’s project:                                                                      any poetry before, the hardest bit is getting started, but     Acrostic
                                                                                     the best thing to do is just start writing and see what
• Lost Things                                                                        happens. You can fine tune it later.                           In an acrostic poem, the letters of a word are written
• Growing Up                                                                                                                                        vertically down the left-hand side of the page and each
• Change                                                                                                                                            letter is the beginning of a new word or phrase. They
                                                                                     HOW DO I START?                                                can form a sentence or short phrase or simply be a list of
Don’t forget to keep an eye out for updates on Facebook                                                                                             words.
                                                                                     You might get inspiration to start your poem from
(https://www.facebook.com/StaffsUniPGCE) and we’ll use                               anywhere. It could be a tweet or a news headline or            Examples
#StaffsPoetryArt on Twitter and Instagram.                                           something someone says to you. It could be something
                                                                                                                                                    Sunny days
                                                                                     you’re passionate about or a hobby or a character from a
                                                                                     book you’re reading in lockdown. It could be the noises        Plants awakening
                                                                                     or silence you can hear in your garden or Piers Morgan’s       Raindrops on the roof
                                                                                     rants on GMB or Donald Trump’s speeches. It could be           Interesting clouds
                                                                                     a photograph you’ve seen or a piece of artwork or a            New flowers
                                                                                     Tik Tok challenge. It could be an Xbox or Playstation
                                                                                                                                                    Grey skies
                                                                                     game….be creative and write about something you feel
                                                                                     strongly about.
                                                                                                                                                    Acrostic by Lewis Carroll (Lorena Alice Edith)
                                                                                     Once you’ve written it, read it through and check you are
                                                                                     happy. Read it aloud – how does it sound?                      Little maidens, when you look
                                                                                                                                                    On this little story-book,
                                                                                     Don’t forget to give it a great title too.                     Reading with attentive eye
                                                                                                                                                    Its enticing history,
                                                                                                                                                    Never think that hours of play
                                                                                     Some help…                                                     Are your only HOLIDAY,
                                                                                     WHAT IS POETRY?
                                                                                                                                                    And that in a HOUSE of joy
                                                                                     Poetry is a form of writing where the poet expresses his       Lessons serve but to annoy:
                                                                                     or her feelings about an issue or idea. You might want to      If in any HOUSE you find
                                                                                     simply explore your feelings but you might also want to        Children of a gentle mind,
                                                                                     have an impact on your reader or send them a message or        Each the others pleasing ever—
                                                                                     shock them, for example. You don’t have to – it’s your poem.
                                                                                                                                                    Each the others vexing never—
                                                                                     There are many different types of poem but some of the         Daily work and pastime daily
                                                                                     more common ones are listed below with an example,             In their order taking gaily—
                                                                                     but remember that we’re not looking for perfection.            Then be very sure that they
                                                                                     You can explore the best form of writing for what you          Have a life of HOLIDAY.
                                                                                     want to say. These are just ideas to help you and give
                                                                                     you somewhere to start. We’re not looking for anything         https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/topics/z4mmn39/
                                                                                     specific – this is your poem and you need to own it!           articles/ztdvw6f

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Playing with words in poetry

HAIKU                                                                                                            Do not be afraid to play around with words when you         A poet who often plays on the way words sound is Brian
                                                               Helpful Haiku Hints!                              are writing poetry. Many poets use features of word play,   Bilston. In the poem ‘You Took the Last Bus Home’ he
A haiku is a Japanese form of poetry. It has three lines.                                                        such as puns, to add humour to their poetry. A pun uses     plays on popular phrases that people say and their
                                                               What is a haiku?                                  multiple meanings and the similar sounds of words for       different meanings, such as when we say we catch the
The first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7
syllables and the third line has 5 syllables. Think of it as   A form of Japanese poetry.                        a humorous impact. For example, in a love poem about        train or take the bus home.
a snapshot, like a photograph or a moment in time. You                                                           vegetables, I might say that ‘I love you from my head
could create a series of haiku on the same theme if you                                                          tomatoes’ instead of ‘to my toes.’
wished.
                                                               Structure
                                                                                                                 You Took the Last Bus Home                                  Fall
Examples                                                       First, five syllables.
An old silent pond...                                          The second line has seven.                        you took                                                    She loved to catch
A frog jumps into the pond,                                    Final five, and done!                             the last bus home                                           the falling leaves
                                                                                                                                                                             in autumn
splash! Silence again. (By Basho)
                                                                                                                 don’t know how                                                  she
                                                                                                                 you got it through the door                                 		             would
                                                               Content                                                                                                                sit
                                                                                                                 you’re always doing amazing stuff                           and       wait
                                                               Usually, nature:                                                                                                under		        trees
                                                               the animal kingdom and the                        like the time                                                   until
                                                               changing seasons                                  you caught that train                                       		           she’d
                                                                                                                                                                                cautumn

The tiger charges                                                                                                Brian Bilston                                               Brian Bilston

Its tail flicking the snow high
Stripes bear down on me.
                                                                                                                 Instead of travelling on the bus, he is suggesting that     If you are really creative, why not even make up your
                                                                                                                 they picked up the bus and brought it inside.               own word?

                                                                                                                 Or in this poem called ‘Fall’, which is the American word   Remember, this is your poem – you can express yourself
                                                                                                                 for Autumn, he plays on the words by using the spelling     however you like.
                                                                                                                 of the word Autumn and applying it to the rhyme,
                                                                                                                 caught them.

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A crash course in Imagist poetry

DID YOU KNOW?                                                Now that you’ve filled in the boxes, remove any words        THE ENGLISH SONNET                                          Is heavier now. No wonder they protest.
                                                             that you think are unnecessary – the Imagists said to use                                                                Arthritic fingers, problematic neck,
Imagism was a poetic movement that valued everyday           as few words as possible to get the message across.                                                                      Sometimes causing mild to moderate pain,
                                                                                                                          A sonnet has 14 lines and is one stanza long. It has a
life in all its mundane details, and when you know this,                                                                                                                              Could well persuade me I’m an ancient wreck
                                                                                                                          specific rhyming pattern: ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. It uses
you soon find that you can write a poem about just about     Here is an example of what I came up with as I looked                                                                    But here’s what helps me to feel young again:
                                                                                                                          iambic pentameter (For help with this, see: https://
anything!                                                    out of my living-room window.                                                                                            My love, who fell for me so long ago,
                                                                                                                          www.rsc.org.uk/shakespeare-learning-zone/macbeth/
                                                                                                                                                                                      Still loves me just as much, and tells me so.
                                                                                                                          language/key-terms#) Historically it was written on the
Example
                                                             Pick a noun or an    A lamppost
                                                             image (a car, a                                              theme of love but modern sonnets are written on all sorts
                                                                                                                                                                                      https://www.poetryfoundation.org/articles/70051/
                                                             flower, a piece of                                           of different themes and topics.
In a Station of the Metro – Ezra Pound (1913)                litter etc.)                                                                                                             learning-the-sonnet

The apparition of these faces in a crowd:                                                                                 Examples
                                                                                                                                                                                      https://www.theguardian.com/books/2016/feb/13/
Petals on a wet, black bough.                                                                                                                                                         wendy-cope-simon-armitage-andrew-motion-
                                                             Describe that noun A solitary lamppost, with graffiti        Sonnet 18:                                                  shakespeare-love-sonnets-21st-century
In just two short lines, Pound captured a snapshot of life   – if it is a car, what scrawled in permanent marker;         Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
– a fleeting moment that is preserved forever. There is a    colour is it? Is                                             By William Shakespeare
                                                                                    the light is flickering.
hint of rhyme (half-rhyme) in crowd/bough, and the use       there frost on the
of language in this poem allows it to really stand out –     windshield?                                                                                                              FREE VERSE
                                                                                                                          Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
apparition suggests something ghostly, for example!                                                                       Thou art more lovely and more temperate:                    This is exactly what is sounds like – you are free to do
                                                             Write a metaphor     The light flickers in morse code        Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,               whatever you like! There is no strict rhyming pattern,
Here is how you can do the same.                             that links closely   to signal the dusk.                     And summer’s lease hath all too short a date;               rhythm or other rules! It is more like natural speech.
                                                             to the image you                                             Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
Fill in the following boxes based on something that you      described earlier
                                                                                                                          And often is his gold complexion dimm’d;                    Examples
can see outside of your window:
                                                                                                                          And every fair from fair sometime declines,
Pick a noun or an
                                                                                                                          By chance or nature’s changing course untrimm’d;            Fog by Carl Sandburg
image (a car, a                                                                                                           But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
flower, a piece of                                                                                                        Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st;                The fog comes
litter etc.)                                                 Warden – T Longshaw (2020)                                   Nor shall death brag thou wander’st in his shade,           on little cat feet.
                                                                                                                          When in eternal lines to time thou grow’st:                 It sits looking
                                                             a solitary lamppost                                          So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,                 over harbor and city
                                                                                                                          So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.            on silent haunches
Describe that                                                with graffiti scrawled in black marker
noun – if it is a car,                                                                                                                                                                and then moves on.
what colour is it?                                           flickers in morse code
Is there frost on
                                                             and signals the dusk
                                                                                                                          Sonnet (inspired by Sonnet 22)
the windshield?                                                                                                           Wendy Cope                                                  Autumn by T.E. Hulme

                                                                                                                          My glass can’t quite persuade me I am old –                 A touch of cold in the Autumn night—
Write a metaphor
that links closely                                                                                                        In that respect my ageing eyes are kind –                   I walked abroad,
to the image you                                                                                                          But when I see a photograph, I’m told                       And saw the ruddy moon lean over a hedge
described earlier                                                                                                         The dismal truth: I’ve left my youth behind.                Like a red-faced farmer.
                                                                                                                          And when I try to get up from a chair                       I did not stop to speak, but nodded,
                                                                                                                          My knees remind me they are past their best.                And round about were the wistful stars
                                                                                                                          The burden they have carried everywhere                     With white faces like town children.

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Connotations: Associated words, ideas or images
                                                                                       that a particular word evokes

Spoken Word Poetry (Slam)                                                              For example… Red might be associated with anger, passion, danger or love. You might want to use this table to
                                                                                       explore ways of using different words in your poem.
This is a type of poetry which expresses a person’s story
or struggle and is usually strong, powerful, emotional
and moving. It usually has a strong sense of rhythm (like                                                                                                                   Ways I can suggest this within
                                                                                                 The Word                       Ideas associated with this word
rap music) and has a musical feel to it. There are no                                                                                                                                 my poem
rules with spoken word poetry, other than that the poem
should have a great sound – it is supposed to be read
aloud at a poetry ‘slam’!

Check out these websites:
http://slam.poetrysociety.org.uk/
https://poetrysociety.org.uk/competitions/
slambassadors-uk/teachers-toolkit-tips-for-running-
slam-poetry-sessions/
http://joelletaylor.co.uk/

You might also consider the following:

• Do you want to use rhyme? Will it rhyme on every
  line or just some lines? Will it have rhyming couplets?
  (https://www.youngwriters.co.uk/info/other/poetry-
  terms/rhyming-couplets)
• Which words will you choose? It’s always handy to have
  a thesaurus open https://www.thesaurus.com/ could
                                                                                                                                     Look at this example from ‘Checking out me history’ by John Agard;
  we use ‘contented’ instead of ‘happy’ or ‘sombre’                                      Accent and Dialect                          ‘Dem tell me
  instead of ‘sad’? Which words best explore what you
  are trying to say or how you want your reader to feel?
                                                                                         in Poetry                                   Dem tell me
                                                                                                                                     Wha dem want to tell me
• Will you use punctuation? You may have learned                                                                                     Bandage up me eye with me own history
  about enjambement (where the sentence is spread                                        Our themes this year are personal,          Blind me to my own identity
  over more than one line) or caesura (where there                                       so write about yourself and the             Agard uses non-standard spelling to represent his own accent and sound –
  is punctuation in the middle of the line). These                                       things you know.                            poetry is all about sounds!
  techniques will affect the way the poem sounds when
  read aloud.                                                                            Find and use your own voice,                Or try using some non-standard     Some examples of dialect words
• How many verses will your poem have and why?                                           personalise your poem through               words in your poetry.              in Stoke-on-Trent
• Will your poem be written from your perspective or                                     your accent and dialect.                    We have a rich cultural heritage
                                                                                                                                     in Stoke, listen out for unusual     ‘Ay up          Tara!           Nana
  will you write it from someone else’s perspective?
• Do you want to write for a specific audience?                                          A big part of this is writing in the        words that you and your family
                                                                                         words you use and in the way you            and friends use. Can you use         Hello       Goodbye         Grandma
                                                                                                                                     them in your writing?
                                                                                         speak – this is called using your
                                                                                         dialect in poetry.
                                                                                                                                     Have a go and start writing!
                                                                                                                                     I bet you have some fantastic words and sounds inside you!

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Sounds to create effects

Poets use devices to jazz up their writing. There are many   Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time,                      ALLITERATIVE EFFECTS
different techniques they use: punctuation, repetition,      But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
irony, but let’s look at how the writer uses sounds to
                                                             And flound’ring like a man in fire or lime.—                   Letter                                                     Sound
create different effects.
                                                                                                                               B     Hard/plosive (makes an explosive sound when pronounced)
                                                             What do you notice about the sounds that appear?
     Alliteration, consonance and assonance are devices
     the poet uses to create different effects.              What effect does the poet try to create?                          K     Guttural/ hard/ plosive

     Alliteration is the repetition of the initial                                                                             D     Hard/ plosive
     consonant, for example, “Betty Botter bought            The alliterative ‘f’ sounds in the slows down the rhythm as
     some butter, but she said, this butter’s bitter; if I   you move your mouth around the two close ‘f’ sounds, also
                                                             creating the sense of clumsiness in the way you read it.          F     Hard
     put it in my batter, it will make my batter bitter…”
     Consonance is the repetition of the consonant                                                                             G     Hard/ guttural/ plosive
     sound in the sentence, for example, “Try to light       The ‘s’ sound in the line, ‘someone still was yelling
     the fire/ The squeaky wheel gets the grease/ It’s       out and stumbling’ creates a ‘hissing’ sound, creating           M      Soft
     hot and monotonous/Stem end and blossom end/            imagery of quickness and disjointedness from the ‘f’
     And every fleck of russet showing clear.” (“After       sounds. The pace quickens mimicking the panicked                 W      Gliding/ wispy/ airy
     Apple-Picking” by Robert Frost)                         tone of the soldier.
                                                                                                                                     Sibilant: can suggest smoothness, slyness, controlled anger. Repetition of the ‘s’ sound can create
     Assonance is the repetition of the vowel sounds in                                                                        S
                                                                                                                                     a sense of quiet.
     the sentence, for example, “upon an island hard         QUESTION 1:
     to reach, the east beast sits upon his beach. Each      “Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots,
     beast thinks he’s the best beast.”                      But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
                                                             Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
                                                             Of gas-shells dropping softly behind.”
Let’s have a look at some excerpts from
Dulce et Decorum Est by Wilfred Owen
                                                             Can you identify any alliteration, consonance or
                                                             assonance? What effect does it have on the tone,
“Knock-kneed, coughing like hags.” The consonance of
                                                             pace or rhythm of the stanza?
the ‘k’ sound in this simile, emphasises how the young
soldiers are suffering from illness and gives a ‘plosive’
                                                             What effect does it have on the reader?
coughing sound- just like the soldier later in the poem.

“and watch the white eyes writhing in his face” the          QUESTION 2:
consonance of the ‘w’ sound slows down the pace and          Look at this line:
illustrates the slow suffering of the soldier. The use of
                                                             “He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.”
assonance is also evident, the ‘I’ sound also slows down
the pace and a disjointed and uncomfortable rhythm to
                                                             Why do you think Wilfred Owen chose these words?
this part of the poem.
                                                             What sounds are created when saying them?
Let’s take a closer look. Read these four lines aloud.       What imagery does this create?
                                                             How does it help the reader understand the horrors
“An ecstasy of fumbling                                      of war?

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The Big Question:
How can I use metaphors to create a poem                                                                               Poetry writing tips

ABSTRACT NOUN                                             CONCRETE NOUN                                                • Don’t overthink it, poetry doesn’t have to be hard!

An abstract noun is a feeling or concept that you         A concrete noun is a noun that can be identified
                                                                                                                       • Write about something that interests you
cannot touch, such as happiness or education.             through one of the five senses (taste, touch, sight,         • Write about something or someone you know such as: family member, pet,
                                                          hearing, or smell).                                            favourite place, friends etc
                                                                                                                       • Can you use your favourite film or song and turn that into a poem?
A metaphor compares two things that aren’t alike, but have something in common. Which of these nouns and               • Poetry doesn’t have to rhyme, so don’t force it too if you can’t
definitions make the best metaphors? Remember to mix the abstract and the concrete!
                                                                                                                       • Brainstorm/mind map your ideas

                                                                                          Is a thing of value that
                                                                                                                       • Read other poetry on the same topic, it might give you some inspiration
                                                           Is a living thing, that
       LONLINESS                    FRIENDSHIP
                                                            grows in the earth
                                                                                        can be exchanged for the       • Think about how you want it to make people feel; do you want it to be funny? Sad?
                                                                                              things you need

                                                          Is the quality of putting     Is the act of sharing what     You can also see some more top tips on this video:
       GENEROSITY                 SELFLESSNESS
                                                           others before yourself          you have with others
                                                                                                                       https://youtu.be/afkVvgtUqag

                                                               Is a kind of                 Is feeling at peace
         MONEY                          TIME
                                                             nourishing food                    with yourself

NOW WRITE YOUR OWN POEM!

Select your best metaphor and make it grow into a whole
poem. Think about each of your senses – taste, touch, sight,
smell and sound – and use them to add more detail.

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Creative task

We are going to work on writing our own poetry. For our      STEP 3
first go, we are going to try and write a poem about our
favourite animal.                                            Using your animal, and your plan, write your own 2 stanza
                                                             poem
STEP 1
Choose an animal and write down all of the things you        Giraffe! Giraffe! Spindly legs standing tall
think characterises that animal. Think about:                in the dry savannah. I wonder; how does it feel
                                                             Having such a long and windy neck?
•    Patterns
•    Colours                                                 His sandy yellow complexion warms hearts
•    Body parts                                              All over the African plains, and his chocolate
•    Sounds/senses                                           Brown spots tantalise the eyes as he stretches
                                                             His legs across the land.

                                                             His razor-sharp ears twitch as he hears rustles
                      Hexagonal spots                        From afar, his navy blue tongue slyly poking out
                       Sandy yellow                          To attract the attention of his mates.
                       Deep brown                            And like a stallion at the races, he gallops.
                        Windy neck
                       Pointed ears
                     Long blue tongue
                     Hooves - clop clop
                                                               HAVE I:
                        Spindly legs
                                                               • Used 5 techniques?
                                                                 Which ones
               WHAT ANIMAL AM I?
                                                               • Created a clear start, middle and end?
                                                               • Used tone to tell you how I feel about giraffes?

STEP 2
Decide your techniques for each part                         Remember that the most important thing is to
                                                             express your ideas and feelings in a creative and
Start - Giraffe! Giraffe! Spindly legs standing tall
                                                             interesting way.
Hexagonal spots
Sandy yellow - put with brown colour                         We are really looking forward to reading your
Deep brown – Metaphor, similar to burning bright but         poems and seeing your artwork.
about brown/yellow combination
Windy neck – rhetorical question about how it feels
Pointed ears
Long blue tongue – smile – as blue as...
Hooves – clop clop – onomatopoeia
Spindly legs – at the start with verb phrase standing tall

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                            Poetry and Visual Arts Project 2021, created in
                           conjunction with students from local Secondary
                                Schools and supported by Stoke CEP.

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