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Mission Statement
    Promote the ongoing advancement,
recognition, and professional development
         of women crime writers.
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          Board Members
          Lori Rader-Day, President                                  inSinc is the official publication of Sisters in
        S.G. Wong, Vice President
                                                                     Crime International and is published four
        Faye Snowden, Secretary
           Jacki York, Treasurer                                     times a year. One-year dues are $50 for pro-
       Tracee de Hahn, Membership &                                  fessional US and Canada writers and $40 for
          Development Liaison                                        non professionals; lifetime, $500 and $400.
    Kellye Garrett, Member at Large                                  Address and all other changes can be made
Stephanie Gayle, Grants/ACA Coordinator                              by members at our website.
  Debra H. Goldstein, Monitoring Chair
      Edwin Hill, Education Liaison                                  Information in inSinC is submitted or
      Vanessa Lillie, Publicity Chair                                reprinted from sources listed in each
      Shari Randall, Library Liaison                                 article. Where required, permission to
         Barb Ross, Web Liaison                                      reprint has been granted and noted. SinC
       Alec Peche, Chapter Liaison
                                                                     does not investigate each submission inde-
 Sherry Harris, Immediate Past President
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Presidents Sisters in Crime

Sara Paretsky                 1987—88      Barbara Burnett Smith     1999—00       Marcia Talley            2009—10
Nancy Pickard                 1988—89      Claire Carmichael McNab   2000—01       Cathy Pickens            2010—11
Susan Dunlap                  1989–90
                                           Eve K. Sandstrom          2001—02       Frankie Bailey           2011—12
Margaret Maron                1990–91
                                           Kate Flora                2002—03       Hank Phillippi Ryan      2012—13
Carolyn G. Hart               1991—92
P. M. Carlson                 1992—93      Kate Grilley              2003—04       Laura DiSilverio         2013—14

Linda Grant                   1993—94      Patricia Sprinkle         2004—05       Catriona McPherson       2014—15
Barbara D’Amato               1994—95
                                           Libby Hellmann            2005—06       Leslie Budewitz          2015—16
Elaine Raco Chase             1995—96
                                           Rochelle Krich            2006—07       Diane Vallere            2016—17
Annette Meyers                1996–97
Sue Henry                     1997—98      Roberta Isleib            2007—08       Kendel Lynn              2017—18

Medora Sale                   1998—99      Judy Clemens              2008—09       Sherry Harris            2018—19

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Table of Contents
From Molly .........................................3
                                                              from Molly

                                                             W
                                                                            hen I was a child, my grandpa
From Lori Rader-Day...........................4
                                                                            spent summers with us. He
SinC into Great Writing.......................5                             was a wonderful companion
                                                                            for a young child — an abso-
Board Slate..........................................6        lute treasure trove of stories, which he called tales. And he
NaNaWriMo                                                     knew how to build anticipation. “Tell me a tale,” I’d beg as
                                                              we sat on the front porch swing. “Aw-w, dogs have tails.” He’d
    Doreen O’Skea................................9            answer. “Well, tell me a story,” I’d counter. “You’re not sup-
                                                              posed to tell stories,” he’d reply evenly. After several rounds of
From an Editor — Elevator Pitches
                                                              my pleadings and excuses, he would finally begin with “Once
    Kerry Cathers...............................12            upon a time …” Oddly enough I don’t remember any of his
                                                              tales, just the process.
Library Liaison
                                                              Our family didn’t have a TV until I was in first grade, but
    Shari Randall................................15
                                                              we did have a big brown Bakelite radio. Daddy listened to
We Love Libraries                                             sports, I listened to kids programs, Mother didn’t really listen
                                                              at all, but Saturday nights were for Grandpa. He always
    Susan Hammerman......................16                   tuned in to what Mother referred to as “Great Buckets of
Education — Learn During Lockdown                             Blood.” As soon as that organ sounded the first ominous
                                                              chords, she would hustle me outside where we’d sit on the
    Lori Rader-Day.............................18             back steps where she’d tell me “about when you were a little
                                                              girl” and how to whistle between two blades of grass.
Move Your Writing to New Levels
    Allison Baxter...............................19           I suspect that wondering about the forbidden fruit in those
                                                              “buckets of blood” planted the seeds for my great love of
What I Love about Writing Fiction                             mysteries. As soon as I was able to read for pleasure and
Building a World                                              found mysteries in our school library, I was hooked for life.
    Connie Berry.................................21           I never dreamed that the stories in those buckets and the
                                                              sinister organ music would lead to my TBR stacks overflow-
Counseling Cops
                                                              ing with terrific mysteries — suspense, private eye, police
    Ellen Kirschman, PhD...................23                 procedurals, and cozies set in countries all over the world.
                                                              How grateful I am for the mystery community and for my
The Truth Behind Fictional Crime                              grandpa’s stimulating my curiosity about what was in all
    Kristen Houghton........................25                those buckets!

Awards & Recognitions                                         Till next time …

    Gay Kinman..................................27
Fabulous Forewomen
                                                                       .S. SinC National sent a question to mem-
                                                                      P
    Susan Rowland, PhD....................29                          bers asking about your favorite writing tools.
                                                                      The response was nearly overwhelming! We’ll
Chapter News ...................................32
                                                                      begin showing them in this issue — look for
Virtual Chapter Meetings                                              the email icon.
                                                                      By the way, the request has ended.
    Lori Rader-Day.............................33

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from Lori
Dear Siblings,

Last week I got an email asking if I would speak to an arts camp for teens about writing a mystery pod-
cast. I have never written a podcast script. I don’t write for teens. I don’t have kids. I like other people’s
kids, but …not enough to hang out with them on Zoom, y’know?

This is where I might have found another taker, someone who writes for that age group — except the
talk was very short notice, only half an hour, online. I would have had to spend longer than a half hour
tracking down another speaker for them. Fine. I said yes.

I didn’t have any talk that was only 30 minutes, but I pulled together a few pieces that added up to some basic concepts
to consider, PDF-ed a handout to leave behind, put on my Zoom shirt (it has lemons on it), and … had a great time.

Was there any doubt? I love talking with other writers, don’t you? But maybe I was a little scared that all my references
would be too old, that I would be revealed as just another dorky adult, a Facebook Karen among youthful, techno-savvy
users of — I can’t even name a social media app here, as it will be outdated by the time this publishes. But here’s the thing: I
am a dorky adult, and I used to be a dorky teen, too, one who would have loved to write a mystery podcast, if such a thing
had existed. Teenage-me would have been geeked to meet a writer and talk shop, to know that a writer cared enough about
my writing to spend a little time encouraging me.

I gained several things from doing this session. First, I now have a 30-minute talk about mystery elements in case I ever
need one again. (Don’t ask. The answer is no.) Also, putting together a primer is a great way to remind yourself of some
of the ways to play with story elements and reader expectations. But more than that, I got a glimpse of the future of
mystery and, if we’re lucky, of Sisters in Crime. These young people were serious, silly, thoughtful, smart, big readers, and
eager to participate in this thing we have.

This thing we have, though — it’s not ours. We are only stewards of it. Sisters in Crime may seem like part of the firma-
ment of the mystery community, but it’s only 30-plus years old and, as we’re seeing right now in our community and out
in the world, change is possible, unavoidable, sometimes swift.

In 2019 (doesn’t that feel like a long time ago now?) I got to help celebrate Sara Paretsky as she received the Fuller Award
from the Chicago Literary Hall of Fame. I spoke for all SinC members when I thanked Sara for the work she had started.
Did she hope to break down misogyny in publishing and the patriarchy worldwide on her own watch? In the first year?
She did. She’s an ambitious one, that Sara. But it is no failure that she didn’t. We continue the work. Sara was a steward,
and now? We are.

Sisters in Crime continues to exist because volunteers put in the time to make sure it does. Some (ahem) put in a great
deal of time, but only because it’s important, not just professionally, not just personally. The future of Sisters in Crime is
being written — and secured — by what we do now, all of us: the people we invite in, how we make them feel welcome
and safe, how we support them and their careers. That work isn’t only for the board, but is also an opportunity for local
chapters and their boards, for all members.

Sisters in Crime is more than a group of writers and readers. Our founding, in protest for equality, means that we are
steward-ing something beyond our own careers. We have to see the bigger picture. But if we do it right, we help make
sure there are mystery writers, mystery readers, and mystery books way out into a future that, right now, we might be
struggling to imagine. But I assure you: it’s out there, and this week, the future is writing a podcast.

                                                                                                                 Lori
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2020–21 Board Slate
W
                  e welcome the 2020-21 slate for our         Secretary
                  Board of Directors and bid a grateful       Faye Snowden
                  farewell to Debra Goldstein, who led        Faye is the author of four mys-
                  the Monitoring Project for the board        teries including the latest, A
for 5 full years, and Chris Goff, who got our webi-           Killing Fire. She has published
nars program off the ground.                                  short stories and poems in var-
                                                              ious literary journals and small
                                                              presses. Though writing is her
President
                                                              first love, Faye has been in the
S.G. Wong
                                                              information technology industry
Sandra publishes as an indie
                                                              25+ years, serving in both highly
author as well as with tradi-
                                                              technical and leadership roles throughout her career.
tional publishers; is creator
                                                              Faye works and writes from her home in Northern
of the crime/speculative Lola
                                                              California.
Starke novels and Crescent
City short stories; and                                       Treasurer/Authors Coalition
also writes contemporary                                      Representative
suspense. An Arthur Ellis                                     Jacki York
Awards finalist and Whistler                                  Jacki York is a CPA with a back-
Independent Book Awards nominee, as well as a                 ground in auditing nonprofits.
mentor, speaker, and a founding board member                  She has completed and reviewed
of SinC-Canada West, she is privileged to work in             990s in professional and vol-
service of an organization dedicated to equity and            unteer capacities, is a certified
community.                                                    internal auditor (CIA), and a
                                                              certified fraud examiner (CFE).
                                                              She is a member of the Delaware
Vice-President                                                Valley Chapter of Sisters in Crime and the Guppies
Stephanie Gayle                                               Chapter.
Stephanie is the author of the
Thomas Lynch mystery series,                                  Grants and Awards Coordinator
which starts with Idyll Threats.                              V.M. (Valerie) Burns
A member of Sisters in Crime                                  Valerie is the author of three mystery
since 2014, she’s delighted                                   series: the Agatha Award-nominated
to be part of an organiza-                                    Mystery Bookshop series, the Dog
tion devoted to equality. She                                 Club series, and the RJ Franklin
co-created the Boston reading                                 mystery series. She is a member of
series Craft on Draft and served as president of              Sisters in Crime, Mystery Writers of
Grub Street’s Novel Incubator Alumni group. A                 America, Dog Writers Association
graduate of Smith College, Stephanie works at                 of America, International Thriller
MIT doing finance stuff for “people too smart to              Writers, and a member of the East Tennessee chap-
do basic math.”                                               ter of Sisters in Crime. She was born and raised in
                                                              northwestern Indiana, but currently resides in Eastern
                                                              Tennessee with her three poodles.

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Monitoring Project Liaison/
Membership Development                                      Authors Coalition
Liaison                                                     Representative
Tracee de Hahn                                              Cynthia Kuhn
Tracee de Hahn is the author of                             Cynthia Kuhn is an English
Swiss Vendetta and A Well-Timed                             professor and author of the Lila
Murder, both set in Switzerland.                            Maclean Academic Mysteries:
Her work is inspired by her                                 The Semester of Our Discontent,
background in architecture and                              The Art of Vanishing, The Spirit
history and her years living over-                          in Question, The Subject of
seas. She is also a member of Mystery Writers of            Malice, and The Study of Secrets. Honors for the
America and International Thriller Writers.                 series include an Agatha Award, William F. Deeck-
                                                            Malice Domestic Grant, and Lefty Award nomi-
                                                            nations. She lives in Denver with her family and is
Member at Large                                             past president of Sisters in Crime-Colorado.
Kellye Garrett
Kellye’s debut, Hollywood
Homicide, won the Anthony,                                  Publicity Liaison
Agatha, and Lefty awards for                                Vanessa Lillie
best first novel, and her sec-                              Vanessa is the Amazon best-sell-
ond, Hollywood Ending, was                                  ing author of Little Voices,
featured on the Today show                                  which received starred reviews
and nominated for Anthony                                   in Publishers Weekly, Library
and Lefty awards. Kellye                                    Journal and was among the Best
spent eight years working                                   Debuts 2019 by Bolo Books.
in Hollywood, including a stint writing for Cold            For the Best, releases September
Case. She is the co-founder of Crime Writers of             8th, and she’s currently working
Color and is working on an #ownvoices domestic              on her third novel, which is set
suspense.                                                   in rural Oklahoma where she’s from. She now lives
                                                            in Providence RI with her husband and sloth-
                                                            obsessed son.
Education Liaison
Edwin Hill
Edwin’s novels include Watch
                                                            Chapter Liaison, Alec Peche
Her, The Missing Ones, and
                                                            Alec Peche is the author of
Little Comfort. He has been
                                                            14 books and one novella in
nominated for Edgar and
                                                            the Jill Quint, MD, Forensic
Agatha Awards, featured in
                                                            Pathologist series and the
Us Magazine, received starred
                                                            Damian Green series, about a
reviews in Publishers Weekly, Booklist, and Library
                                                            modern-day MacGyver. Both
Journal, and was recognized as one of “Six Crime
                                                            series are soft-boiled myster-
Writers to Watch” in Mystery Scene magazine. He
                                                            ies. Alec lives in Northern
lives in Roslindale MA with his partner Michael
                                                            California with her rescue dog and cat and enjoys
and his favorite reviewer, their lab Edith Ann, who
                                                            wine, skiing, and making excuses for not writing.
likes his first drafts enough to eat them.
                                                            She’s a member of NorCal, Coastal Cruisers, and
                                                            the Guppy Chapters.

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Ex-Officio
Library and Bookstore Liaison
Shari Randall                                                 Acting Executive Director
Shari is the author of the Lobster                            Julie Hennrikus
Shack Mystery series and the                                  Julie Hennrikus is the owner of
upcoming Ice Cream Shop                                       Your Ladders, a coaching and
Mysteries from St. Martin’s                                   training resource for artists and
Press. Her debut, Curses, Boiled                              writers. Julie is a former board
Again, won an Agatha Award                                    member of Sisters in Crime
for Best First Novel. A former                                and of Sisters in Crime New
librarian, she loves travel, antiques, mermaids, and          England. Her career has been
all things New England. She and her husband, a                in arts administration, most
retired Coast Guard officer, have two globe-trotting          recently as the executive direc-
daughters and live on Connecticut’s shoreline.                tor of StageSource, a service organization for the
                                                              New England theater community. She is also an
                                                              author of several mystery series who credits much
Web Liaison                                                   of her success to the connections she made through
Barbara Ross                                                  Sisters in Crime.
Barbara is the author of the
Maine Clambake Mysteries                                      inSinC Editor
and the Jane Darrowfield                                      Molly Weston
Mysteries. She is a multiple                                  Molly has served as editor
Agatha Award nominee and has                                  of inSinC for 11 years. She’s
won the Maine Literary Award                                  reviewed and lectured about
for Crime Fiction. Barbara is                                 the mystery genre for nearly 30
a past president of SinC New                                  years. In 2012, she received the
England, and has served as                                    Raven Award from Mystery Writers of America
co-chair of the New England Crime Bake and as                 for “outstanding achievement in the mystery field
an editor of the Best New England Crime Stories               outside the realm of creative writing.” Molly lives
series. In her former life she was chief operating            in Garner NC. a
officer of two successful start-ups in educational
technology.
                                                                 One thing I do to keep me inspired and
Immediate Past President                                         on track for a new novel is a Plot Wall.
Lori Rader-Day                                                   I use color-coded sticky notes for each
Lori is the Edgar Award-                                         chapter and scene changes. Then I use
nominated and Anthony and                                        different colored notes or pens for each
Mary Higgins Clark Award-                                        character. This allows me to visually see
winning author of, most                                          the plot lines, as well as any main char-
recently, The Lucky One. She                                     acters that are missing for too long.
lives in Chicago, where she                                                                  —Linda Kuhlman
co-chairs the mystery confer-
ence Murder and Mayhem in
Chicago. Before writing full time, she was a com-
munications executive in higher education and
health care non-profits for 20+ years.

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National Novel Writing Month—
      Build Discipline and Learn Craft
                                                                                                  by Doreen O’Skea

S
        ome writers seek inspiration through long               Maureen Walsh — NaNoWriMo
        walks, hot showers, or copious research — or            seemed like a fun way to force
        they rely on bursts of genius. What happens             myself beyond the first few chap-
        next is a mystery — well, hopefully, since we           ters of my novel-in-progress after
are of that genre. But the perfect book idea is just an         re-polishing the beginning and
idea until it’s written. The elusive element to getting         trying to outline my way through
the book drafted is discipline.                                 a plot.
While many writers are rigorous in their process,               What drew you to the challenge of writing a novel in
setting their writing time and protecting it fiercely,          a month?
others may fall prey to the temptations of procrasti-
nation, rearranging their desk space, sharpening all            Gigi — I had never previously finished any fiction
the pencils even when they write every word on the              writing projects (at least not in my adult life — I
computer …                                                      wrote a lot of stories and scripts as a kid). I had never
                                                                managed to get over my inner editor and reach the
Discipline is mindset and habit. Studies have shown             end of a project, because I knew my writing wasn’t
that it takes 21 days to build a new habit. What if             good, so I kept feeling I needed to edit as I went. I
there were help to build the habit of being a more              was sabotaging myself. I needed something to push
productive writer?                                              me past that spot. I thought if a group of friends who
                                                                were as inexperienced at writing as I could rise to the
Enter the National Novel Writing Month
                                                                challenge of 50,000 words in a month that I could
NaNoWriMo challenges writers to write 50,000
                                                                give it a shot.
words in the 30 days of November, focusing energy
on drafting and away from the internal editor. What             Maureen — I knew I wouldn’t end up with a publish-
started in 1999 as an experiment has grown to a                 able manuscript, but I needed to keep moving for-
movement that engages hundreds of thousands of                  ward. And I’ve always been motivated by deadlines,
writers in the daily habits needed to craft a novel.            never good at working on a project a little at a time.
I connected with two alumnae of NaNoWriMo to                    What kept you motivated during that time?
get their perspective on the challenge and how it
helped each of them refine their process and sharpen            Maureen — It was fun! I love the discovery part of
their skills.                                                   writing fiction, finding out who might show up to
                                                                take a part, creating situations and interactions, find-
When you first heard of NaNoWriMo what did you                  ing out a detail I tossed into chapter four could link
think?                                                          to a development in chapter thirteen.
Gigi Pandian — I heard about it about 15 years ago              Gigi — I had been toying with an idea for a mys-
and became an early adopter. I was unpublished and              tery novel for a few years, but I never managed to
eager to learn more about the craft, and it sounded             get anywhere with it. I loved the story, though, so I
like a fun challenge. I had no idea if I’d be successful,       didn’t want to abandon it. But I was stuck, so I was
but why not?                                                    motivated to finish the story and see if I still liked it.
                                                                That, and coffee.

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Has the experience changed the                                 and it’s why I got involved in my local Sisters in
way you write now?                                             Crime chapter and learned more about the craft of
                                                               writing and how to turn my work in progress into
Gigi — Definitely. I completed
                                                               a good novel.
my first full draft of the novel
that became Artifact (my first                                 What do you want people to know about after NaNo
published novel) because of                                    ends?
NaNoWriMo. That showed me
I’m most effective by finishing a                              Gigi — Take time to celebrate! But after that, don’t
draft quickly. That doesn’t mean                               rush the finished project. There’s a 99% chance
it’s a finished product but I learned the very impor-          your book is not ready to be published yet. If you
tant lesson that editing as I go is not for me. I need         like what you’ve written, revise the book. If you
to tell the story first, and then go back in and fix it.       don’t, you’ve still learned a lot and you can write
                                                               something else that will be even better.
Maureen — I have the confidence that if I just
start writing — not thinking or outlining endlessly            I do set the draft aside for a chunk of time while
— the story will start to take shape and, at some              I work on another project, so I can look at it with
point, I’ll see it coming together. I know I need to           fresh eyes before I make revisions. (Depending on
get the words and ideas flowing, watch the story               how rough a draft it is, I also might send it to a
progress, and then work on the structure.                      couple of my critique partners at that stage.)

What advice would you give to someone before they              Maureen — There are official
embark on the journey?                                         winners, but no losers. If you
                                                               didn’t make your 50,000-word
Maureen — Relax. Think about your goals beyond                 goal, what did you accomplish?
50,000 words in 30 days. Do you want to draft a                What did you like most about
novel from beginning through the middle to an                  NaNoWriMo that you can make
end? Get in the habit of daily writing? Try a differ-          part of your writing habit? What
ent genre or form? Produce a funny family history?             was too difficult or discourag-
Once you know the purpose behind your 50K/30,                  ing? What can you change?
have fun!
                                                               Also, you’re going to be tired. You may be thrilled
Gigi — Your words don’t have to be good. But                   with the messy manuscript you’ve created, but lack
they need to be written. You can fix them later. Use           the mental energy to revise so much as a comma.
NaNoWriMo as a free pass to let go of your inner               Take time to celebrate and relax, and don’t lose
editor. Track your words on the NaNoWriMo web-                 that appreciation for what you’ve achieved when
site. It’s validating to see the graph, plus the public        you come back to your novel with an editor’s eye.
declaration is helpful, to hold yourself accountable.
                                                               Finally, what did you learn about yourself during the
You never know where it will lead, so even if                  journey?
you’re feeling uncertain, go with it. My first unex-
pected lesson happened when I completed my                     Gigi — So much! I’ve had 10 novels published
first full novel draft at the end of NaNoWriMo                 now, and even with external publisher deadlines,
that I submitted it to the Malice Domestic Grant               I still use the energy of NaNoWriMo each year to
competition for unpublished traditional mystery                draft a new novel. There’s something magical about
writers. I wasn’t expecting to win, but I wanted to            it that works as a physiological trick for me.
do something to celebrate my accomplishment. I                 Writing is hard work, but it’s so rewarding to
was surprised and thrilled when I got the call that            reach the end of a novel. That’s the secret of
I won that year’s grant. That’s when told me that              NaNoWriMo. No matter how long it takes me
I should take my hobby of writing more seriously,

                                           inSinC • September 2020 • Page 10
to fix something later, I’ve put in the work to have
written a full draft, which makes it harder to aban-
don a project. (Though I have abandoned some pro-
jects. It wasn’t wasted effort, because I always learn       There are a number of things that make
something, but not all of my experiments are fit for         my writing space special for cranking out
publication.)                                                stories, but the most important tool is my
                                                             chair. A rather unexciting item, but it has
Even though I think of myself as a plotter, I need to
                                                             saved my back and hips as I now spend more
listen to my characters, so NaNoWriMo is a great
                                                             time at my desk. I paid a small for-tune
way to let my characters run wild and follow their
                                                             for a Herman Miller, and it is worth every
lead. They’re always right.
                                                             nickel. Who’d have thought some-thing so
Maureen — As a writer, I learned that I love the
creative rush of flat-out writing without polishing                            — Linda Shenton Matchett
along the way. I also learned I can’t set aside big
blocks of time to write and assume I’ll make major
progress. Some of my best ideas and writing come
when I’m under pressure.

[Because of NaNoWriMo] I designed a daily writ-
ing sheet that keeps me focused on writing every               Aeon Timeline
day and helps me stay on track when my word
count falls short or I miss days. The average daily            The Emotion Thesaurus by Becca Puglisi
count is 1,666.33 words, which adds up to 5,000
                                                               My Mac!
words every three days. Suppose someone starts
NaNoWriMo on November 4th or takes off three                   Design Works Standard Issue Personal
days over Thanksgiving. They may think those                   Journal — it lies flat and doesn’t bleed
5,000 words are impossible to make up—but it only              with fountain pens
raises the average daily word count by 185 words to
1,851.5. Many writers routinely set a goal of 2,000             Decaf Earl Grey hot tea in a ReDuce ther-
words.                                                         mos (blue that matches one of my foun-
                                                               tain pens)
While we all continue to shelter in place, sometimes
struggling to make sense of this wild world we find            Assorted beautiful mugs
ourselves in, it might do our author souls good to             My dog
have a new challenge to remind us why we write and
love the craft. The NaNoWriMo may be the nour-
                                                                                     — Elizabeth Richards
ishment we need right now.

Look for Sisters in Crime programming and tools—
including a webinar with Gigi in October—to get you
ready for NaNoWriMo this year, and help you revise
your draft afterward. a                                        I use ProWriting Aid to help in the edit-
Doreen O’Skea is working on her first novel in                 ing process. It’s really made me more
Ashland, Oregon. She is a member of Sisters in                 aware of echoes, redundancies, and
Crime.                                                         passive language as I write new material,
                                                               too.
                                                                                     — Donna Schlachter

                                         inSinC • September 2020 • Page 11
by Kerry Cathers

Elevator Pitches for Authors

“T
                  ell me about your book.”                        you as an author. But the
                                                                  opposite is true. I’ve seen it
                  Depending on your answer, it can
                                                                  at networking events, where
                  be the best or the worst thing an
                                                                  an entrepreneur drones on
                  agent or publisher could say to you.
                                                                  and on about every aspect
Trouble is, coming up with a response isn’t all that              of their business. One by one, the crowd loses inter-
easy when you are starting out. How do you con-                   est and stops listening. Once that happens, the sale
dense your characters, plots, sub-plots, and setting              is lost.
into a simple answer? How do you explain that
twist at the end without itemizing everything that                The same is true for pitching a book. Brevity is best.
happened? Most important of all:                                  There are a couple of reasons for this. First is infor-
                                                                  mation overload. We can’t process excesses of infor-
How do you get them interested?
                                                                  mation in a short span of time, so we stop trying.
Pitches are not easy to write; in some respect, they’re
                                                                  When bombarded with data, we shut down and
more difficult than writing the novel. And, when
                                                                  stop listening. Second, we get bored. The reason
asked, many give the wrong response.
                                                                  commercials are short is so they don’t lose the audi-
Have heart, there are ways to increase your chances               ence’s attention.
of success. Part of it is mindset.
                                                                  You have 75 words (30 seconds) to catch someone’s
Rather than thinking of this as a writing exercise, or            interest. At a stretch, you have 110 words (45 sec-
an expression of your art, know it for what it is: It’s           onds). If they offer you a minute, that gives you 150
a business pitch, or what is commonly referred to as              words. Not many, so make good use of them. You
an elevator pitch.                                                must not exceed your time limit.
As a freelancer, I have given hundreds of pitches (and            The main reason people fail with their pitch is they
written quite a few for others). I have been in the               don’t understand its role in the selling process.
audience for countless more, listening to ones that
were effective, and surviving those which weren’t.                The purpose of the pitch
                                                                  When asked what the purpose of a pitch is, many
As an aspiring author, you’re no different from any
                                                                  respond that it’s to get published. (They say the
other entrepreneur: You’re selling your product to
                                                                  same when asked what the purpose of a query letter
your clientele. It just happens your product is your
                                                                  is.) That’s wrong. No agent/publisher ever signed an
novel and your client is an agent or publisher. The
principles which make a successful elevator pitch,                author on their pitch alone.
make for a good book pitch.                                       If not that, then what?
Where people go wrong                                             A successful pitch gets the agent/publisher inter-
The most common and the most damaging error                       ested. That’s it. Nothing more. Once they’re inter-
people make is giving too much information. You                   ested, you’ve moved beyond the pitch into the next
might think you have to tell them everything won-
                                                                  stage of the selling process which is a completely
derful about your novel in order to get them to sign
                                                                  different strategy with its own set of rules.
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If you instigate a conversation, then your pitch has           You have to be vicious with your script and strip
worked. Move to step two.                                      away all the irrelevant. This is a bit different from
                                                               fiction writing where description is essential (within
Or the next stage might be a request for sample                limits). There are a few writing rules that can help:
pages. If so, you’re no longer relying on your pitch,
it’s down to your story. If they don’t, that doesn’t           f Remove redundancies (brief moment, or close
mean your pitch is a failure. Anything that keeps                 proximity).
them talking about your book is a success.
                                                               f Use the active voice (“He discovers     …” rather
Remember, it’s the writing and the plot that sell                 than, “He will discover …”).
your book, not your pitch.
                                                               f Eliminate adverbs or adjectives unless they are
How to write a successful pitch                                   key plots points. (Red is relevant only if the serial
How do you take an 80,000-word book and turn it                   killer is targeting people in red cars and your
into a thirty-second commercial?                                  heroine has just bought a red car.)

Don’t think you can do it? Think                                                f Keep the sentences short. This
it’s impossible? Every person I have                                                 prevents you from rambling,
written an elevator pitch for has                                                    allows you to place emphasis
told me theirs is that unique busi-                                                  where needed, and is easier for
ness that cannot be condensed into                                                   the listener to understand.
a thirty-second commercial. By                                                  f   Eliminate negatives “dangerous”
the end of the session, they were                                                    rather than, “not safe”). Too many
proven wrong.                                                                        negatives (nots) and you confuse
                                                                                     the listener.
Still not convinced? The pitch for the film Alien was
(reportedly) three words: Jaws in space. Screenwriter          Every word in your pitch has to serve a purpose. If it
Blake Snyder in his book, Save the Cat, insists that,          doesn’t, remove it.
if a writer cannot sum up their story in a single              What’s next?
sentence, they’ve not thought it through enough. He            Believe it or not, writing the pitch is only the begin-
insists the pitch forces you to articulate the core idea       ning.
of the story.
                                                               Once you have it written you have to practice it. You
Anything more is decoration and, in this instance,             need to be familiar with it; you can’t read it off a piece
decoration does more harm than good.                           of paper or the notes you scribbled on your hand.
How do you do it?                                              If you know it, you can capitalize on unexpected
With a lot of drafts. That might sound facetious,              encounters. Meeting an agent doesn’t just happen at
but it’s true. You’re not going to get it on the first         the Pitch Sessions and you want to be ready for any
go. As soon as you have the key points of your plot,           opportunity that presents itself. Be able to say your
start creating your pitch (and your query and your             pitch whenever, wherever anyone asks you.
synopsis). Write down what you think are the key
elements, then set it aside and come back to it later.         How you say your pitch is as important as what you say.
At this stage, don’t censor yourself.                          You want it to sound like a conversation, not like
 A pitch is not written to a word count; it’s edited           a commercial. You want to sound confident and
 down to a word count.                                         professional.

 When reviewing your draft, label each item as must            A couple of hints from the entrepreneurial world
 say, should say, like to say. When that’s done, throw         (and the world of public speaking). Nerves make
 out everything labelled should or like.                       you talk faster, which makes you sound less

                                            inSinC • September 2020 • Page 13
credible. Practice saying your pitch at a very slow
pace and over pronounce your words. You want to
get accustomed to saying it slowly, so when you
give your pitch, you default yourself into speaking
slowly. Never practice it at normal speed unless you
want to know how long it is. When you combine                   Dogs fed, emptied, and denied access to
your attempt to speak slowly with the adrenaline                windows.
rushing through you, what comes out is a normal
pace of speaking. If you practice it at a conversa-             Computer on a lectern or my bed.
tional pace, you will speak too quickly when you                At least two cups of tea.
give it and the listener might have difficulty under-
standing you (especially if you speak as quickly as I           Paper and pencil.
sometimes do).                                                  Television tuned to shows for the
                                                                illiterate, like Naked and Afraid, Botched,
We’re still not at the end. As an entrepreneur, I’ve            or a Housewives franchise. Amazing
seen people win over a potential customer with                  bizarre plot details arise. B . . .t the Naked
their pitch, then lose them when they have no fol-              Psychopath will someday appear in a hor-
low-up. Think of every question the agent/publisher             ror tale.
might ask. Your sub-genre. Your experience.                     Write until interrupted by husband,
                                                                daughter, or dogs. Always urgent and
Your word count. Your target audience. Your answer
                                                                demanding instant solution.
to “tell me more.” Your target audience. Anything
you can think of, come up with a response. That                 Writing every day, but not necessaily
way, you’re never caught off guard, or stumbling for            mysteries or other fiction. I will soon be
an answer, or rambling. Or, worst of all, not having            writing a class paper on tree communica-
                                                                tion.
an answer at all.

                               If they ask for more                                 — Christine W. Kulikowski
                               details, keep it short.
                               You don’t want
                               them pointing to
                               their watch telling
                               you time’s up when
                               you’re in the middle           Repurpose your pitch
of your synopsis. Or, if you meet them in the hall,           The principles which make for a good pitch will
boring them with a chapter-by-chapter recitation.             help you write an effective query letter — concise,
                                                              enticing, and brief. You have a few more words with
Being brief and remaining within the time frame               a query letter, but, as with an elevator pitch, if you
makes you look prepared and professional. You                 don’t get to your point quickly, your audience will
relay to them that you know the procedure, are                lose interest.
comfortable with it, and can operate within its
boundaries. You show them a professional who’s                Best of luck! a
serious about a career. That builds trust and helps           Kerry Cathers is a contract editor and writer who entered
convince them you’ll be easy (and worth their                 the publishing world as a Production Editor for a univer-
while) to work with, which helps your chances of              sity press. Having sat on both sides of the table (hiring
success.                                                      editors and being hired) she understands the industry
                                                              from both perspectives. She has often been approached
As a final preparation, write a pitch for your fol-           by aspiring authors asking the wrong question: where
low-up book, just in case they ask.                           they can get the best editor.

                                           inSinC • September 2020 • Page 14
by Shari Randall

G
          reetings, fellow book and library lovers.            The posts have already started run-
          Here’s the latest library news.                      ning on SinC’s social media sites.
                                                               Many thanks to Vanessa Lillie for
                                                               her fabulous graphics. Feel free to
                                                               share them.
We Love Libraries Special Grants
Many Siblings reached out following the death of               These are the themes. If your book — or a SinC
George Floyd. President Lori Rader-Day, We Love                sibling’s book — fits the theme, feel free to post.
Libraries Coordinator Susan Hammerman, and I had               Remember, we’re only posting books by SinC
a conversation about how SinC could help libraries             authors.
in communities affected by the protests. I did some
                                                               Ten themes, one per week for summer.
research on the Minneapolis protests and discovered
that East Lake Library, the closest library to Cup Foods,      Fatal Fireworks — Dive into crime novels set during
was damaged by fire. A special Doris Ann Norris We             summer holidays.
Love Libraries! grant will go to East Lake Library
                                                               Chills for Hot Nights — Dive into novels with a
through the Hennepin Library Friends Group.
                                                               paranormal element.
For the next few months we will target WLL grants              Perfect for a Picnic — These culinary cozy mysteries
to libraries that serve the Black community, includ-           come with a side of great recipes.
ing the Enoch Pratt Library in Baltimore; the
Fulton Library System in Atlanta; and the Louisville           Like a Hurricane — Warning: These thrillers come
Free Public Library System.                                    with a mind blowing twist.
                                                               Dark Hearts — Too much sunshine got you down?
Everyone into the Pool Promo Posts
                                                               Take a break with stories of dangerous deception,
In a reboot of our dearly missed Book Club Central
                                                               twisted minds, and psychological suspense.
lists, SinC will have weekly Everyone into the
Pool social media posts. SinC will post a themed               From Agatha’s Beach Bag — Puzzling mysteries the
graphic on our social media channels, and every-               Queen of Crime would enjoy, all nominated or win-
one with a book that fits the theme can tweet or               ners of the Agatha Award.
post their book cover. Share the posts far and wide!
Use these suggested hashtags: #amreading #books                Lay Down the Law — These books bring the legal
#summer-reading #crimenovels #SistersInCrime                   drama.
#beachreads #SinCrecommends #escapewithabook
                                                               Summer Fling — The only thing better than
#fiction #libraries along with the appropriate genre
                                                               romance is romantic suspense.
hashtags: #suspense #truecrime #romanticsuspense
#cozymystery, etc., to make the posts easy for read-           Crime Coast to Coast — Travel to these enticing
ers to find.                                                   vacation spots without leaving your couch.
Consider adding the following copy to your post:
                                                               Crime Travel — Dive into historical fiction.
When we can’t travel, books are an escape. Stuff your
beach bag with these dangerously good reads from               If you have any ideas on how we can connect SinC
Sisters in Crime.
                                                               authors and libraries, please let me know. a
                                            inSinC • September 2020 • Page 15
by Susan Hammerman

W
                      hen September rolls around, I feel like I should be heading back to school or
                      at very least trying to learn something new, and current events make me want
                      to volunteer. Luckily, I’ve found a way to accomplish both without having to
                      leave my house. The Zooniverse is an online platform where libraries, univer-
sities, and research institutions from all over the world submit fascinating projects that require an army of volun-
teers to complete. With minimal or no training at all, volunteers can help sort, organize, or identify information or
objects for dozens of research projects.
For example, the Boston Library has an active project to transcribe handwritten letters from anti-slavery activists and
abolitionists. Transcribing the letters will make them searchable by keywords and names. The Criminal Characters
project is also a transcription project, where volunteers transcribe Australian prison records from the 1850s to the
1940s. In other projects, you can hunt for earthquakes by identifying seismic activity, watch burrowing owls, catalog
items from the Manchester Museum, or check out what coyotes get up to in downtown Chicago in the middle of
the night. So, something for everyone!

Coordinating the We Love Libraries grant program has been a bright spot for me during this difficult year.
Starting in June, the focus of WLL shifted to fund underserved libraries. Please encourage libraries that are
located in or support underserved communities to apply for the We Love Libraries award. Find grant details
and the brief grant application on our website. A WLL winner of $1,000 is selected each month. The grants
awarded in May, June, and July went to libraries to provide funds to purchase materials during the pandemic,
to rebuild a library after a devastating fire, and to show support for the Black Lives Matter movement and the
tragic death of George Floyd in June of this year.

In California
The May award went to the Porterville Public Library, which was almost
entirely destroyed by a fire. Vikki Cervantes, Porterville City Librarian, wrote
in her grant application, “Our beloved Porterville City Library was destroyed
in a tragic fire on Tuesday, February 18, 2020. Sadly, Captain Figueroa and
Firefighter Jones lost their lives battling the blaze. It has been the most devas-
tating fire in the history of our tightly knit community. Our collection of over
70,000 items were totally lost.” The library used the grant money to purchase
English and Spanish materials for virtual story times. The photo of a wood
panel painted with the word, “Read,” that miraculously survived the fire was in
the June inSinC. The library preserved the panel and will put it on display in
the new library building.

                                            inSinC • September 2020 • Page 16
In Washington
In Texas                                                     The July WLL winner was the Scriber Lake High
The Clear Lake High School Library in Houston                School Library in Edmonds, Washington. Quoted
was the June winner. The school librarian’s appli-           from the application, the $1,000 grant will be
cation states, “We are a community that hits right           used to “Purchase books to enhance our library’s
on the financial border line: just affluent enough           collec-tion of age-appropriate books by Black,
to get no funding for low-income schools, and just           Indigenous, and People of Color (BIPOC) authors
poor enough to really need it. Currently, we are shut        as well as non-fiction books to explore topics such as
down for Covid 19.... [and] are scrambling for free          systemic racism and social justice.”
resources for our students.”
                                                             Pictured at home is School
The $1,000 WLL grant was used to purchase                    Librarian Rachel Ramey with
e-books and audiobooks. Pictured is School                   books by SinC members:
Librarian Shirley Dickey with books by SinC                  Girl, Stolen by April Henry,
members, Sarah                                               Orchards by Holly Thompson,
Zettel Palace of Spies,                                      No Place Like Home by the
Dangerous Deceptions                                         late Mary Higgins Clark,
and Assassin’s Masque;                                       Dividing Eden and Need by
Suzanne Young, The                                           Joelle Charbonneau, and The
Epidemic, The Remedy,                                        Treatment by Suzanne Young. a
and The Complication;
                                                             Susan Hammerman lives in Chicago and writes neo-noir
and Holly Thompson,
                                                             and crime short stories.
Orchards.

                                                                First, as a traditionalist, I depend on my
In Minnesota                                                    trusty Thesaurus and Barzun’s Simple &
The East Lake Library                                           Direct.
located in Minneapolis
                                                                First, as a traditionalist, I depend on my
was nominated for a
                                                                trusty Thesaurus and Barzun’s Simple &
discretionary WLL
                                                                Direct.
grant in June by the
SinC national board.                                            More unusual may be my 11” x 14” Sketch
The library staff wrote the We Love Libraries grant             Pad (i.e., empty sheets) in which I note
will be used to “Help restore the libraries most                ideas, tape things I’ve “noted” elsewhere,
affected by recent unrest in Minneapolis ... [and               etc. I use sticky notes to mark the pages
to] fund programs and resources focused on tack-                — main characters, secondary ones, the
ling the persistent poverty and inequality facing               out-doors, quotes I like — anything that
                                                                strikes me that I may want to include.
our black, brown and indigenous friends and
                                                                Critical too is the two-page spread that
neighbors.”
                                                                I mark as “Timeline” that gets filled in as
                                                                things happen and is the closest to an
                                                                outline that I ever use.
                                                                                     — Victoria Houston

                                          inSinC • September 2020 • Page 17
Learn During Lockdown with Our Online Tools
                                                                                                 by Lori Rader-Day

T
        he world has gone virtual — but Sisters in                         Saturday, October 3, 12-4 p.m.
        Crime was there first with our live webinar                            SinC into Great Writing
        series and the response has been fantastic.                         Creating Authentic Characters
        Hundreds of viewers continue to turn out for              with Lou Berney, K. Tempest Bradford, & Walter
two live webinars each month across four topic areas:                  Mosley, moderated by Lori Rader-Day
writing craft, the business of writing, marketing/
publicity, and crime/law expertise (forensics, investiga-                  Wednesday, October 7, 8-9 p.m.
tive techniques, etc.).                                            Slay NaNoWriMo: Two Converts Share Their Secrets
                                                                  Gigi Pandian and Rachael Herron, moderated by
Our most popular webinar? “Mastering Plot Twists”                                Michelle Corbier
with Jane K. Cleland. A record 548 attended live,
while 122 viewed the archived recording within a                          Tuesday, October 20, 7-8:30 p.m.
week of the presentation. As a SinC member, you can                 10 Common Mistakes Writers Make About the Law
watch this archived webinar and others on your own                      with Leslie Budewitz, moderated by
schedule on the SinC website. To suggest webinar                               Donna Van Braswell
topics and speakers, submit info via our form.                         Tuesday, November 10 & 17, 3-4:30 p.m.
Don’t have time to watch a full webinar right now?                           Sell Your Books, Not Your Soul
Check out the SinC-UP! video library on the Sisters                 with Jaden Terrell, moderated by Sarah Smith
in Crime YouTube channel. Hear great tips from                  Register for all webinars and virtual learning events
authors, agents, and editors like James Patterson,
                                                                at Sisters in Crime under the “Learn” tab.
Paula Munier (Talcott Notch), Hank Phillippi
Ryan, Terri Bischoff (Crooked Lane), and more, all              Welcome New Education Team Members!
just a minute or two. Enjoy a new “A Minute with                Lane Stone lives in Alexandria,
…” video every week when you subscribe.                         Virginia and Lewes, Delaware.
Upcoming SinC Webinars                                          She writes the Tiara Investigations
Our last few months of the year offer great webinars            Mysteries and the Pet Palace
and special events, including two webinars to sup-              Mysteries. When not writing, she
port November as National Novel Writing Month                   enjoys traveling and volunteering
(NaNoWriMo), as well as our first foray into offer-             for good causes, like the Delaware
ing our annual SinC into Great Writing workshop                 River & Bay Lighthouse Foundation
online for every member to access! All times Eastern.           and AAUW. She has a post-graduate
                                                                certificate in Antiquities Theft and Art Crime.
           Tuesday, September 8, 3-4 p.m.
      The Way We Weren’t: Writing Historical Fiction                             Donna Van Braswell went from being
   with Susan Elia MacNeal, interviewed by Lori                                  an Army brat to a rocket scientist,
       Rader-Day, moderated by Lane Stone                                        then began writing upon retirement.
                                                                                 She’s lived from Alaska to Turkey and
           Tuesday, September 22, 8-9 p.m.                                       travels the world, setting her novels in
    Get Ready for NaNoWriMo with Mystery-Making                                  fascinating places. Her debut novel,
   with Edwin Hill, Lorraine Sharma Nelson, &                                    Daughter of the Ancients, was released
    Carolyn Marie Wilkins, Interactive Webinar                                   in June. She is married and has raised
Presented by the SinC New England Chapter, mod-                                  two amazing children. She lives in
erated by Lisa J. Lieberman, chapter vice president.                             North Alabama and in Florida. a

                                             inSinC • September 2020 • Page 18
by Allison Baxter

W
                  ho hasn’t lingered on the Writers’
                  Plateau? We put in hours of writing,             you are to writing and
                  improving craft and content — and               how open to feedback
                  then it seems like we’re stuck. We may          people truly are.”
need a boost or a frank conversation to start climbing            There are also new
the mountain again. There are numerous ways to                    opportunities for mem-
improve your writing (and countless articles on the               bers of Off Campus
topic) but this article details four strategies with a range      Writers Workshop in
of price tags, with words of wisdom from your fellow              Winnetka IL. Right
Siblings. So, let’s go back to school in September with           now, they are operating remotely through Zoom
critique groups, distance instruction, writing coaches,           and helping writers form critique groups during
and professional editors.                                         interactive meetings. Like Guppies, the groups are
                                                                  autonomous.
1) Critique Groups
When I asked for experience from our                              Pitch Wars has a forum where writers can get other
membership, overwhelmingly, writers love                          writers’ help and advice on a range of topics. There
and need their critique groups.                                   is a message board dedicated to people looking to
                                                                  form critique groups.
Finding other writers might require some
word of mouth. Triss Stein, author of Brooklyn                       Emilya Naymark, whose short story “Exit Now” will
Legacies, met members of two critique groups                          appear in the anthology After Midnight: Tales from
through local chapters of Mystery Writers of                          the Graveyard Shift, found a writing group that she
America and Sisters in Crime.                                         loves through Meetup: “I’m not really sure what
                                                                        is so magical about this group, but I finished the
MA Monnin, whose short story “Siren Song”                               manuscript and wrote three short stories that
appears in All That Weird Jazz, believes it                               went on to publication at these meetings.”
doesn’t matter that the members write in different
genres “because we critique for plot holes,                               Raquel Reyes, whose short story “A Star
blocking errors, confusion, and grammar                                   Goes Dark” is in Mystery Most Theatrical,
and punctuation.”                                                         an upcoming Malice Domestic anthology,
                                                                           found a group on Crime Writers of Color.
Jen Collins Moore, author of Murder                                        Each member reads a chapter live and
in the Piazza, met her group through                                        receives feedback in round table fashion.
a writing class. She believes that “six
people has proven to be a                                                   2) Remote Learning: Online Classes,
great size for our group...I think                                           Webinars, and Podcasts
the...best thing is to make sure                                               The explosion in remote-learning possi-
you’re aligned with them in terms                                               bilities has been one advantage of being
of how dedicated                                                                 stuck at home (besides all that time to
                                                                                  write. Many of these are free or low cost
                                                                                  and provide opportunities for questions
                                                                                  and feedback.

                                               inSinC • September 2020 • Page 19
Online Classes and Webinars                                      words on either a weekly or monthly basis. We can
Off Campus Writers Workshop hosts a weekly live
                                                                 catch early issues of plotting, repetitive language,
Zoom meeting with speakers on topics from writ-
                                                                 exposition, character development, etc.”
ing to business to poetry.
                                                                 Mia Manansala, author of the novel Arsenic and
Story Studio in Chicago has a huge catalog of long
and short courses with a range of prices.                        Adobo coming in May 2021, trained as a book coach
                                                                 through The Author Accelerator Program with
SinC Webinar Archives have access to both new                    Jennie Nash. She says coaches offer account-ability
and previous programs with topics such as writing                plus editorial and emotional support for authors
skills, crime and justice, marketing, and the busi-              whose goal is publication. The process begins with
ness of writing.
                                                                 intake forms, following up with phone calls and a
Guppies has inexpensive online classes for members               regular submission and editing schedule
on a range of topics. Susan Hammerman, whose
recent short story “Dominant Hand” is part of the                4) Professional Editors
Mondays Are Murder series, found that the amount                 There are different kinds of editors for different needs
of homework varied but the instructors were                      and skill levels. Once again, the prices will be higher.
upfront about how much work was expected.
                                                                  llen Butler, author of Pharaoh’s Forgery, starts with
                                                                 E
International Writing Program, the non-aca-                      beta readers for development, then uses an editor
demic counterpart to The University of Iowa Writers’             before she publishes. Her advice? Ask people you
Workshop, has MOOCs (Massive Open Online                         know. She uses Lucky 13, whose owner she met at
Courses)), free classes that are open to all. Courses have       a conference, and pays per word. She also suggests
lessons, video tutorials, and community-based feedback.          that you have one person copy edit and a different
Podcasts                                                                      person proofread.
Tracy Forgie Koppel, a YA writer based in                                     Elena Taylor, author of the novel All We
Chicago, recommends Alone in a Room
                                                                              Buried, perfects her work using beta read-
with Invisible People and Writing Excuses.
                                                                              ers, her writing partner, and her mother:
Others include Storygrid, K.M. Weiland,                                       “My mom happens to be the best proof-
and Crime Writers of Color.                                                   reader I know,” she said. Elena also edits
                                                                 for Allegory Editing. To test drive their services, you
3) Writing Coaches
                                                                 would submit a sample and the editor would offer
Writing coaches are a good way to get organized
                                                                 you “a clear outline of what each of our three levels of
and stay accountable. Individualized attention
comes at a higher price than critique groups and                 service would contain and exact pricing based on the
remote learning, but the writers I interviewed felt              current word count.”
the investment can be well-justified.                            If you’ve been on the Writer’s Plateau so long you
Terri Bischoff, Senior Acquisitions Editor at                    feel like you’re sheltering in place there, take heart.
                                                                 The boost you need is a link, Zoom call, Bluetooth
Crooked Lane Books, has done freelance coaching
and editing. She explains that “...the writer gets               speaker, or email away. a
feedback on a regular basis which can keep them on               Allison Baxter lives outside Chicago where she teaches English as a
track and pointed in the right direction. For exam-              Second Language and writes The Chicago Neighborhood Crime Series.
ple...I either read and respond to a set amount of

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